Friday, June 6, 2014

Haiku Aug 2012

സ്വാതന്ത്ര്യ ദിനം
കൂട്ടിലെ തത്തമ്മയ്ക്ക്
പതാക നിറം !

Independence Day--
colours of the flag
on a caged parrot

1 comment:

  1. December 6, 2013
    Michael Dylan Welch
    12/6, 1:30pm
    Michael Dylan Welch

    Seems like a nice haiku. I like the irony of it being Independence Day, yet of course the parrot is not independent at all. The overtones of what that means to the people of the country you might be referring to are ominous. Nicely done (I'd just change the hyphen to a proper em dash, or use two hyphens to suggest that intent).