December 6, 2013 Michael Dylan Welch 12/6, 1:30pm Michael Dylan Welch
Seems like a nice haiku. I like the irony of it being Independence Day, yet of course the parrot is not independent at all. The overtones of what that means to the people of the country you might be referring to are ominous. Nicely done (I'd just change the hyphen to a proper em dash, or use two hyphens to suggest that intent). http://www.graceguts.com/
December 6, 2013
ReplyDeleteMichael Dylan Welch
12/6, 1:30pm
Michael Dylan Welch
Seems like a nice haiku. I like the irony of it being Independence Day, yet of course the parrot is not independent at all. The overtones of what that means to the people of the country you might be referring to are ominous. Nicely done (I'd just change the hyphen to a proper em dash, or use two hyphens to suggest that intent).
http://www.graceguts.com/